Hello, today we learned about the Beatles and here is the blog hope you learn something new from it.
So many people liked the Beatles music but some people didn't and people who liked their music was mostly young ladies and they loved Beatles music because they were the first singer that sang about love, sex, drug and those kinda stuff and that's the main reason why young girls were going crazy.
People who didn't like their music was old people because they didn't really understand them and they thought that the Beatles should not really be singing because they thought that they are going against religion and stuff they thought they are singing and going to hell.
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Hi Hassan, I liked your writing about the Beatles tour. It's nice that you've wrote the work in your own words, but I know what you're writing about but do the others? Next time, you should include what you are writing about and an image which wouldn't look plain. Also, you should make more sentences, it looks that you've made a whole paragraph into one sentence.
ReplyDeleteI hope reading your next post.
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ReplyDeleteHi hassan, I like how you explain about the beatles like againts the beatles and tour. You really explain hard to let people know more about beatles, maybe next time put images and put introduction so people can read what subject you doing and what is the task is. but i still like your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Hasan, I like how you shared with us what you learnt about the Beatles, Most of your viewers will probably learn something new from what you have talked about, which is good.
ReplyDeleteFor next time your blog would be a lot more interesting if you added a couple images about the Beatles, to attract more viewers.