I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I really like your timeline about 9/11; it was a really tragic event. You have included really informative information on your timeline which informs readers what happened on the day and what time was it. You have make a short and simple timeline which is really good. Next time, check on your punctuation like capital letters. Have a nice day!! Bye!!
Hi Hassan,
ReplyDeleteI really like your timeline about 9/11; it was a really tragic event. You have included really informative information on your timeline which informs readers what happened on the day and what time was it. You have make a short and simple timeline which is really good. Next time, check on your punctuation like capital letters. Have a nice day!! Bye!!